I really like it
buuuut.
when the violin kicks in with the choppy sound, i personally dont like it, but hey, it kinda works. the only thing i'd like to see changed is at 2:25 when the bass kicks in, change the violin to steady notes, if that makes sense... rather than the string chopping, have it flow from note to note.
cant think of the right words right now, sorry
otherwise, 8/10 easy.