Didnt like it, but...
but... I have to give you props for the skill. The song is done well.
Now, as for why i didnt like it. This also has nothing to do with it being unfinished.
The beginning was nice, i liked it. It would have fit well into an ambience genre, or possibly trance with a bit of changes. But i found that the bass and the vocals didnt fit together. It sounded as though it (the bass) was invading on a song in which it didnt belong. If that was your intent, then you did a good job.
Also, the bass drop, it bothers me. The snare continuing while the bass is dropping should (in my opinion) be removed. And add a little more either bass, or something else to it so it isnt so simplistic.
I liked the echoed drum, and the electric noises that came immediatly after, but again, felt too light.
The strings in that echoed drum and electric noises bit, the rest of the song needs them. I'm a huge fan of strings, and maybe thats just me being a bit biased. But i think it would sound good if you kept the string bit going, at least for a little while longer.
As for my comment above about the vocals and bass clashing, after 1:32. I would try adding more "noise" as a mid way between the vocals and the bass. Perhaps the strings (again, mentioned above) would fill that gap. Or maybe try a type of synth. Just add something.
Anyways, score breakdown.
9/10 not a full ten because i just didnt like it, i found it kindof annoying. yet i still consider the skill it would have taken, and it is not a bad song, just didnt float my boat.
4/5 not full five. But i would gladly change my vote if i saw some of the ideas i gave put into this work.
No insult intended, just trying to be honest and helpful. If i sounded full of shit, then ignore this comment, and have a nice day.
~DJD