Hmmm
Gotta agree with Dualschock on this one. I think the thing i like most about your music is the the depth and refinement you put into your songs. i cant really think of any time listening to your music where i thought "i can totally do this". But this song feels quite simple, and shallow. I'm not sure if simplicity was what you were going for here, or if you were just trying something new.
All the hate-on aside. This is still a good track. I like the melody, but it definitely feels lacking.
Also, i got your reply on my last comment, ill send you a message on SoundCloud