Gotta agree with Dualschock on this one. I think the thing i like most about your music is the the depth and refinement you put into your songs. i cant really think of any time listening to your music where i thought "i can totally do this". But this song feels quite simple, and shallow. I'm not sure if simplicity was what you were going for here, or if you were just trying something new.
All the hate-on aside. This is still a good track. I like the melody, but it definitely feels lacking.
Also, i got your reply on my last comment, ill send you a message on SoundCloud
Ayyy, thanks for the review, bud :)
But as for simplicity goes, that was definitely not the intention I had with this song. I really wish I could understand where the emptiness you and Dualshock are talking about is coming from. Because, in all honesty, I can't hear it :c I'm not saying you guys are full of shit or anything, don't get me wrong. I'm just not sure what's lacking here. I can't address a problem I don't hear, ya know?
None-the-less, you guys are both awesome, and I'm disappointed in myself for not having 10's from the two of you. I've got plenty on the way that I'm sure you'll enjoy ;D
Just wanna say one thing....
before i continue listening to the song.
i heard the first 4 beats and heard "if you can-" before the song stopped and buffered.
now, i was madly in love for about 2 weeks with a dubstep remix i had found online.
i had wished at some point that i could come across another song just as amazing some point in my life.
now.... im going to finish this up pretending i have heard the whole song because its safe to say im going to love this.
my favorite remix of a song, was remixed by my favorite artist. (er... both people remixing the same song)
anyways, im losing my train of thought, dinged my head up yesterday.
anyways, i have faith in you biocide, i love your music, and i feel completely confident rating 5 stars on every song you put up. and i try to grab all the music i can find by you.
im also planning on hitting up soundcloud (which im 99% sure your on) and donating some fuel for your cause......
..... im yammering way too much. i said i wouldnt listen to the rest of the song till i was done writing and now i want to listen to it. so.
You, my friend, have just left me one hell of an awesome review. Thanks a ton, man! I really appreciate it :D You're definitely someone I'll be hoping to hear more from in the future. And there's no way to yammer too much! The longer the review, the better, I say :)
Also, please do check out my soundcloud and lemme know your name on there! And thanks again for the review. I can't tell you how happy it makes me to know people like you are really liking my tunes :D
i want you to know how amazing this song is, but i just cant find words fitting.
this is not a song for score, nor is it to be critiqued.
So i leave with only one thing i can say.
This song is beautiful, and i hope you feel better soon. :)
i had chills running down my spine the whole song.
I think you should go and see the doctor.
Cheers and thanks
Ruben -Acid Paradox-
I fucking love your kicks. Soooo much powah!
Hahaha, thanks man! Glad you like em :)
You are a musical genius.
Probably not my place to say, but hell, I'd definitely vote yes were someone to propose the title to you.
Anyways, was hoping you might be able to point me towards some more tunes that are alot like 1:54 onward. I tried about 5 youtube searches for "Hardstyle" but i couldnt find anything quite as.... "Dirty" as this.
My head was hurting (my fault, not yours), but leaking eargasm juices at the same time.
I love your shit man.
Hahahaha! You just have a nac for giving me the best fuckin' comments ever. I really appreciate that man; your review, vote, pretty much just you in general. Haha.
Some of my favorite Hardstyle artists are Wildstylez, Headhunterz, Showtek, Noisecontrollers, Technoboy, Dark Oscillators and Donkey Rollers. I know I'm forgetting some other people but these guys are really great.
Thanks again, man! You're definitely my favorite "fan", for lack of a better word :/
Dude, your giving me the chills again. I'd say stop it, but they feel so good.
Keep these great tunes up and ill keep mentioning your name when i get talkin about Dub with people.
There's definitely not too many people out there as kind as yourself, man. Thank you.
I'm glad you're liking my DnB as well, keep checkin back and I'll probably have some new stuff up soon ;)
Thanks for the rating and commenting again, it's always nice to hear what people have to say.
This is the dub i live for.
Everything was perfect.
Melody was simple, yet catchy and clear, and didnt get annoying.
The bass is perfect, couldnt change a thing about it.
The drop gave me the chills.
And it had the perfect tint of what i call dirt. (im sure theres another name for it.)
DL'd, and set to 5 starts immediately.
Love You/I Do
Thanks a lot for that, man, I really appreciate it. Corny or not, reviews like this really get me smiling. Feels good knowing someone's enjoying my stuff as much as you are.
Thanks for the 10/10, 5/5, and the love, btw. Hahaha!
I'll try to keep up the good work ;)
Really liked it.
Downloaded it. One little thing thats bugging me. Could just be me, but the... ill call it the melody, it sounds flat. Again, could just be me.
Didnt like it, but...
but... I have to give you props for the skill. The song is done well.
Now, as for why i didnt like it. This also has nothing to do with it being unfinished.
The beginning was nice, i liked it. It would have fit well into an ambience genre, or possibly trance with a bit of changes. But i found that the bass and the vocals didnt fit together. It sounded as though it (the bass) was invading on a song in which it didnt belong. If that was your intent, then you did a good job.
Also, the bass drop, it bothers me. The snare continuing while the bass is dropping should (in my opinion) be removed. And add a little more either bass, or something else to it so it isnt so simplistic.
I liked the echoed drum, and the electric noises that came immediatly after, but again, felt too light.
The strings in that echoed drum and electric noises bit, the rest of the song needs them. I'm a huge fan of strings, and maybe thats just me being a bit biased. But i think it would sound good if you kept the string bit going, at least for a little while longer.
As for my comment above about the vocals and bass clashing, after 1:32. I would try adding more "noise" as a mid way between the vocals and the bass. Perhaps the strings (again, mentioned above) would fill that gap. Or maybe try a type of synth. Just add something.
Anyways, score breakdown.
9/10 not a full ten because i just didnt like it, i found it kindof annoying. yet i still consider the skill it would have taken, and it is not a bad song, just didnt float my boat.
4/5 not full five. But i would gladly change my vote if i saw some of the ideas i gave put into this work.
No insult intended, just trying to be honest and helpful. If i sounded full of shit, then ignore this comment, and have a nice day.
Yay a real review! Dont come across those much on this site.
"the strings in that echoed drums noise bit" heh?
Theres some strings in the intro but theyre really quiet, i made the song and can barely hear them.
The kick in the first part of the track is an acoustic one(a real kickdrum), with the highs filtered out, i wanted it to have that downtempo glitch/trip hoppy feel for the first half of the song, and a prominent kick drum kinda detracts from that.
But anyways, thanks a bunch ill consider this in the final version ;)
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